Specifically, on the reading you need to do when you’re a writer.
Reading out loud.
In front of an audience.
This is terrifying enough on its own, but you can manage it. Here are a few hints that I find useful:
- Practise your reading before you turn up at the place of the reading.
- Practise it more than once. More than twice. Go up to five times (after that you’ll freak yourself out).
- Time it – the average reading should go for between 3-5 minutes coz that’s generally all the attention span the audience can bear (unless you’re an awesome storyteller who can hold people’s hearts and minds and ears in the palm of your hand).
- Be aware that what’s written on the page, what looks wondrous to the eye, is not necessarily going to do the tongue and ears any favours. When you read aloud in the privacy of your own lounge room, bedroom, kitchen, gazebo, panic room, listen carefully. Are you breathless? More so than nerves can explain? Then that lovely long sentence you slaved over needs to be read differently. Cut in two or three, pauses added so you can breathe and the listener can enjoy your words. That huge passage of description? Do you really need it all? Is some of that already covered by other lines, and you were just making a point in print? Cut it back, or out entirely (NB: be careful not to take out a salient point or something that gives the story meaning.)
- This is entirely personal, but my rule is don’t drink before you read. You might think it soothes your nerves, coats your tongue with silver, but a nervous person tends to be a gulper and before you know it, you’ve had two or three, your cheeks are red and you’re laughing uncontrollably, falling over your own feet and impaling yourself on the mic stand (if you’re luck – then you can be carted off to hospital and avoid the reading). Trust me, no one will talk about the awesome reading.
So, to illustrate the flensing technique, here are the first two pages of the story I read at Muse in Canberra last Thursday night before Conflux started. Kaaron Warren, Ellen Datlow and I all went along and chatted to a full house about Alice in Wonderful, and Ellen’s new anthology Mad Hatters and March Hares, in which Kaaron and I both have stories. You can see what I took out and what I left in.